Wednesday, 16 September 2026

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 : How to Describe INCREASES & DECREASES Naturally

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 : How to Describe INCREASES & DECREASES Naturally



The goal is not to memorise 20 synonyms for “increase” and “decrease.” A Band 8–9 response chooses vocabulary based on how the line actually moves: gradual, sudden, dramatic, slight, steady, or stable.


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1. First understand the difference

Look at a line and ask:

Did it…

→ rise slowly?
→ rise steadily?
→ rise suddenly?
→ rise dramatically?
→ fall slightly?
→ fall sharply?
→ fall gradually?
→ stop changing?

Your vocabulary should match the movement.


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📈 INCREASE

1. ROSE

The safest formal verb for an upward movement.

rose + from + number + to + number

> The figure rose from 50,000 to 80,000 between 2010 and 2014.



Useful collocations:

rose steadily

rose gradually

rose sharply

rose significantly

rose considerably

rose slightly



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2. INCREASED

A general-purpose verb.

> The number of visitors increased from 2 million to 3.5 million.



Collocations:

increased gradually

increased steadily

increased significantly

increased dramatically

increased slightly

increased by 20%

increased to 50%


Remember:

increased BY = amount of change
increased TO = final figure

> The figure increased by 20,000.



> The figure increased to 80,000.




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3. GREW

Very useful when describing numbers, populations, sales, demand, etc.

> The number of international students grew steadily throughout the period.



Common collocations:

grew steadily

grew rapidly

grew considerably

grew significantly

grew from X to Y



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4. CLIMBED

Good for a noticeable upward movement, particularly when the increase happens progressively.

> The figure climbed from 40% to 65% over the following five years.



Useful:

climbed steadily

climbed gradually

climbed sharply

climbed to 65%



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5. SURGED

Use when something rises quickly and strongly.

> The number of tourists surged from 80,000 to 150,000 in just two years.



Think:

SURGE = FAST + STRONG RISE

Not:

> ❌ The figure surged gradually.



Better:

> ✓ The figure surged dramatically.




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6. SOARED

Use for a very large/dramatic increase.

> The price of housing soared from $200,000 to $350,000.



Think:

SOAR = VERY DRAMATIC RISE

Common collocations:

soared dramatically

soared rapidly

soared to

soared from X to Y


Example:

> The percentage of online shoppers soared from 20% to 65%.




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7. JUMPED

Useful for a sudden increase.

> The figure jumped from 30% to 48% in 2018.



Think:

JUMP = SUDDEN RISE


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📉 DECREASE

1. FELL

The most natural formal verb for a downward movement.

> The figure fell from 80,000 to 55,000.



Useful collocations:

fell gradually

fell steadily

fell sharply

fell dramatically

fell slightly

fell considerably



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2. DECREASED

A general formal verb.

> The number of visitors decreased from 900,000 to 700,000.



Remember:

> decreased by 200,000



> decreased to 700,000




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3. DECLINED

Particularly useful for a gradual or sustained reduction.

> The percentage of people using public transport declined gradually over the period.



Common collocations:

declined gradually

declined steadily

declined significantly

declined slightly

experienced a gradual decline



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4. DROPPED

Often suggests a noticeable or sudden fall.

> The figure dropped from 75% to 50% in 2016.



Useful:

dropped sharply

dropped considerably

dropped suddenly

dropped slightly



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5. PLUMMETED

A very dramatic and rapid decrease.

> The number of visitors plummeted from 200,000 to 90,000 in just two years.



Think:

PLUMMET = VERY FAST + VERY LARGE FALL


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6. SLUMPED

A significant fall, often after a relatively high level.

> Sales slumped to just $2 million in 2020.



It can be useful, but don't force it into every Task 1.


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7. DIPPED

A small decrease, usually temporary.

> The figure dipped slightly in 2016 before rising again.



This is especially useful when the graph shows:

rise → small fall → rise again


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➡️ STABILITY

This is where many students misuse vocabulary.

PLATEAUED

The figure rises or falls and then remains almost unchanged.

> The number of students rose rapidly until 2016 and then plateaued at around 280,000.



LEVELLED OFF

Very similar idea.

> After reaching 80%, the figure levelled off for the remainder of the period.



Think:

CHANGE → FLAT

Do not use plateaued simply because the graph is generally stable.


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⚠️ Important: “HIKED”

You may see hiked on vocabulary lists, but don't teach students to treat it as a standard replacement for rose in every IELTS Task 1 sentence.

“Hike” is commonly associated with things such as:

prices

taxes

interest rates

fees

charges


For general IELTS graphs, these are safer:

> rose sharply
climbed significantly
increased considerably
surged
soared



Example:

> ✓ The government hiked taxes.



But for a general student-number graph:

> ✓ The number of students rose sharply.



is more natural than:

> △ The number of students hiked.




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2. ADVERBS = THE SECRET TO PRECISION

Don't just write:

> The figure increased.



Tell the examiner how it increased.

Large / dramatic change

dramatically

significantly

considerably

substantially

sharply

steeply


> The figure increased dramatically.



> The percentage fell sharply.



Small change

slightly

marginally

minimally


> The figure increased slightly.



> The percentage dipped marginally.



Gradual change

gradually

steadily

progressively


> The number increased gradually.



> The figure declined steadily.




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3. ADJECTIVE + NOUN STRUCTURES

Instead of always using verbs, change your sentence structure.

Increase

a rise

> There was a sharp rise in the number of visitors.



an increase

> The graph shows a significant increase in sales.



growth

> The period witnessed considerable growth in online shopping.



a surge

> There was a sudden surge in demand.



a dramatic increase

> The figure experienced a dramatic increase between 2015 and 2017.




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Decrease

a fall

> There was a gradual fall in the percentage.



a decrease

> The period saw a significant decrease in car ownership.



a decline

> The graph illustrates a steady decline in the figure.



a drop

> There was a sharp drop in the number of visitors.



a dip

> The figure experienced a slight dip in 2016.




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4. HIGH-VALUE COLLOCATIONS

Learn these as chunks rather than individual words.

Increase

a sharp rise

a gradual increase

a steady growth

a dramatic surge

a substantial increase

a significant rise

a considerable increase

a sudden jump

a rapid growth


Decrease

a sharp fall

a gradual decline

a significant decrease

a dramatic drop

a substantial reduction

a slight dip

a steady decline

a considerable fall

a sudden decrease



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5. “THE FIGURE FOR” — VERY USEFUL

Instead of repeating:

> The number of students...



Use:

> The figure for international students...



Examples:

> The figure for international students rose steadily.



> The figure for Australia declined gradually.



> The figure for the UK increased significantly.



This helps avoid repetitive sentence openings.


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6. “THE NUMBER OF” vs “THE AMOUNT OF”

This is an important Task 1 grammar point.

NUMBER OF → countable things

> the number of students
the number of cars
the number of visitors
the number of households



AMOUNT OF → uncountable things

> the amount of money
the amount of water
the amount of electricity



So:

> ✓ The number of students increased.



> ✓ The amount of money increased.



Not:

> ❌ The amount of students increased.




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7. “REDUCED” — USE IT CAREFULLY

Reduce is normally transitive: something reduces something.

> The company reduced the price.



> The government reduced taxes.



For a graph showing a figure going down, use:

> The figure fell.



> The figure declined.



> The figure decreased.



Rather than:

> ❌ The figure reduced.



However:

> The amount of waste was reduced from 50 tonnes to 30 tonnes.



is correct because this is a passive structure.


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8. FROM / TO / BY / AT

These four cause frequent mistakes.

FROM = starting point

> The figure rose from 40%...



TO = ending point

> ...to 65%.



BY = amount of change

> The figure increased by 25 percentage points.



AT = level

> The figure stood at 65%.



Complete example:

> The percentage rose from 40% to 65%, an increase of 25 percentage points.




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9. “PERCENTAGE” vs “PERCENTAGE POINTS”

This distinction matters.

Suppose a figure goes:

40% → 60%

The difference is 20 percentage points.

So:

> The figure increased by 20 percentage points.



If the question specifically asks for percentage change, the relative increase is 50%.

For basic Task 1 descriptions, don't automatically write “20% increase” when the graph shows 40% → 60%.


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10. COMBINING TWO MOVEMENTS

This is where vocabulary becomes much more natural.

Instead of:

> The figure increased. Then it decreased. Then it increased.



Write:

> The figure rose steadily before dipping slightly and then climbing sharply.



Or:

> The number increased gradually, followed by a sharp decline, before recovering towards the end of the period.



Or:

> After surging to 200,000, the figure fell sharply and subsequently levelled off.




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11. “BEFORE” + “AFTER” STRUCTURES

Very useful for describing a sequence.

> The figure rose steadily before plateauing at around 250,000.



> The percentage fell sharply before recovering in 2020.



> The number surged to 180,000 before declining gradually.



> After increasing significantly, the figure levelled off.




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12. USE “WHILE” TO COMPARE TRENDS

For two lines moving differently:

> While the figure for Country A rose sharply, that for Country B declined gradually.



Another example:

> The number of car users increased steadily, while public transport usage fell slightly.



This is much better than writing two disconnected sentences.


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13. “WHEREAS” FOR CONTRAST

> The figure for the UK rose steadily, whereas that for Australia declined slightly.



Or:

> Sales of Product A surged, whereas those of Product B fell considerably.




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14. A COMPLETE TASK 1 PARAGRAPH

Imagine this trend:

USA: 100,000 → 220,000 → stable
UK: 40,000 → 150,000 steadily
Australia: 20,000 → 60,000 → slight fall → 120,000

A weak version:

> The number of students increased in the USA. It increased again. The UK number increased. Australia increased, then decreased, then increased.



A stronger version:

> The number of international students in the USA soared from 100,000 in 2010 to approximately 220,000 in 2016, after which it levelled off. The figure for the UK rose steadily throughout the period, reaching around 150,000 by 2020, while Australia experienced a slight dip in the middle of the period before climbing sharply to approximately 120,000.



Notice that the vocabulary reflects the actual shape of each line.


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15. A VOCABULARY SCALE TO TEACH STUDENTS

Small increase

slightly → marginally

Gradual increase

rose gradually → grew steadily → climbed steadily

Strong increase

increased significantly → rose sharply → surged

Very dramatic increase

soared → rocketed

Use rocketed sparingly because it is more informal.

Small decrease

dipped slightly → fell marginally

Gradual decrease

declined gradually → fell steadily

Strong decrease

dropped sharply → fell considerably

Very dramatic decrease

plummeted → slumped

No major change

remained stable → levelled off → plateaued


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16. Don't Make This Band 9 Mistake

More synonyms ≠ higher band.

This is not good:

> The figure soared, surged, rocketed, skyrocketed and jumped...



You are describing one movement, not showing off vocabulary.

Instead:

> The figure rose steadily until 2015, then surged to 80,000 before levelling off.



Three accurate expressions are better than six forced synonyms.

The examiner rewards appropriate and precise vocabulary, not the number of “advanced” words you can insert.


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17. QUICK EXAM-DAY FORMULA

When you see a line graph:

STEP 1 — Look at the direction

↑ Increase
↓ Decrease
→ Stable

STEP 2 — Look at the speed

slow → gradually / steadily
fast → sharply / rapidly
very fast → surged / plummeted

STEP 3 — Look at the size

small → slightly / marginally
large → significantly / considerably / dramatically

STEP 4 — Choose the structure

Verb:

> The figure rose sharply from X to Y.



Noun:

> There was a sharp rise from X to Y.



Sequence:

> The figure rose before falling slightly and then recovering.



Comparison:

> While A increased steadily, B declined gradually.




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Final Band 8–9 vocabulary bank

Movement Useful language

General increase: increased, rose, grew
Gradual increase :rose gradually, grew steadily, climbed steadily
Sudden increase: jumped, rose sharply
Fast/strong increase: surged
Very dramatic increase: soared
General decrease :went down, fell
Gradual decrease: declined gradually, fell steadily
Sudden decrease :dropped, fell sharply
Very dramatic decrease: plummeted
Small decrease: dipped slightly
Significant decrease: slumped
Became stable: levelled off, plateaued
Increase as noun: a rise, an increase, growth, a surge
Decrease as noun: a fall, a decline, a drop, a dip


The rule to remember:

DON'T memorise “increase = 10 synonyms.”

Memorise:

WHAT happened + HOW much + HOW quickly + WHAT happened next

That is what turns basic Task 1 vocabulary into precise Task 1 reporting.

Tuesday, 15 September 2026

IELTS WRITING — TASK 2 BAND 9 SERIES EPISODE 1 — THE IELTS TASK 2 ESSAY PLANNER

IELTS WRITING — TASK 2 BAND 9 SERIES
EPISODE 1 — THE IELTS TASK 2 ESSAY PLANNER


Core Principle

> DON’T WRITE FIRST. PLAN FIRST.



IELTS Task 2 gives you approximately 40 minutes and requires a minimum of 250 words. Task 2 carries twice the weight of Task 1 in the Writing score, so controlling your time and planning your response properly matters. 

A Band 9 essay is not simply a collection of sophisticated sentences. The examiner needs to see a response that addresses the question fully, develops ideas clearly, organises information effectively, uses vocabulary precisely, and demonstrates strong grammatical control. 


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1. YOUR 40-MINUTE PLAN

Use the same basic routine until it becomes automatic.

5 MINUTES — ANALYSE + BRAINSTORM

Before writing:

Identify the topic.

Identify the question type.

Understand exactly what you must answer.

Underline the key words.

Identify any limits in the question.

Decide your position.

Generate your main ideas.


Do not start writing yet.

5 MINUTES — PLAN

Decide:

Introduction → What will I say?

Body 1 → What is my first main idea?

Body 2 → What is my second main idea?

Conclusion → What will I conclude?

You should know the direction of your essay before you write the first sentence.

25 MINUTES — WRITE

Write:

Introduction

Body Paragraph 1

Body Paragraph 2

Conclusion


Do not stop every few seconds to search for an “advanced” word.

Keep your argument moving.

3 MINUTES — CHECK

Look specifically for:

grammar

spelling

punctuation

missing words

unclear sentences

repeated vocabulary

weak connectors


2 MINUTES — WORD + FINAL CHECK

Check that:

you have reached at least 250 words

every part of the question has been answered

your position is clear

your paragraphs are complete


IELTS specifically advises allowing time to check and correct your writing rather than spending the entire 40 minutes producing new sentences. 


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2. STEP ONE — ANALYSE THE QUESTION

This is where a Band 9 response begins.

Do not immediately think:

> “What essay template should I use?”



Instead ask:

A. WHAT IS THE TOPIC?

What is the essay actually about?

Example:

> Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone.



Topic:

free university education

Not:

education in general


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B. WHAT TYPE OF QUESTION IS IT?

Common Task 2 requirements include:

Agree/Disagree

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Discuss both views

Advantages/Disadvantages

Advantages outweigh disadvantages

Problems/Solutions

Causes/Effects

Two-part questions


The question type tells you what you must accomplish.

However, do not force every question into a memorised template. IELTS itself advises candidates to focus on understanding the actual prompt rather than simply matching it to a memorised essay type. 


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C. WHAT EXACTLY AM I BEING ASKED?

This is the most important question.

Look for instruction words such as:

Discuss

Explain

Evaluate

Why

What extent

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

What are the causes?

What solutions can be suggested?

The instruction determines your response.


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D. IDENTIFY THE KEY WORDS

Example:

> Some people believe that governments should spend more money on public transport rather than building new roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?



Key ideas:

governments

spend more money

public transport

rather than

building new roads

your position

Do not write a general essay about transportation.

Answer this specific question.


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E. CHOOSE YOUR POSITION

For opinion questions, decide your position before you begin writing.

For example:

> I completely agree.



or

> I largely agree, although I recognise one limitation.



or

> I disagree because the proposed approach could create greater problems than it solves.



Your position should remain consistent throughout the essay.

IELTS Band 9 Task Response requires a clear, fully developed position that directly answers the question. 


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3. STEP TWO — PLAN THE INTRODUCTION

Your introduction has one primary job:

> Tell the examiner what the essay is about and what your position is.



A practical Band 9 introduction can contain:

1. PARAPHRASE

Restate the central idea using your own words.

2. THESIS

Give your clear position or answer.

3. OPTIONAL ROADMAP

Briefly indicate the main ideas if this genuinely improves clarity.

Target:

Approximately 40–50 words

Do not turn the introduction into a miniature essay.

Avoid:

long background stories

dictionary definitions

irrelevant history

examples

detailed arguments

memorised filler


Your introduction should be focused and purposeful.


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4. STEP THREE — PLAN BODY PARAGRAPH 1

Your first body paragraph needs one clear controlling idea.

Think:

> POINT → EXPLAIN → EXAMPLE → LINK



POINT

State your main idea.

EXPLAIN

Explain why it is true.

EXAMPLE

Give a relevant example or illustration.

LINK

Connect the idea back to the question.


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Example planning note

Main idea:

Public transport reduces urban congestion.

Why?

One bus can carry dozens of passengers who might otherwise use individual cars.

Example:

A reliable metro system can move thousands of commuters during peak hours.

Link:

Therefore, investment in public transport can address congestion more effectively than simply expanding road capacity.

Notice that the paragraph has one central idea.

Do not put three unrelated arguments into one paragraph.


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5. STEP FOUR — PLAN BODY PARAGRAPH 2

Body 2 should introduce a different major idea.

Do not simply rewrite Body 1 using different vocabulary.

Again:

> POINT → EXPLAIN → EXAMPLE → LINK



Main idea 2:

Public transport can also reduce household transportation costs.

Explanation:

Regular users may spend less on fuel, parking and vehicle maintenance.

Example:

A commuter who uses a monthly rail pass instead of driving every day could substantially reduce travel expenses.

Link:

This makes public transportation particularly valuable for lower- and middle-income households.


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6. THE GOLDEN RULE FOR BODY PARAGRAPHS

One paragraph = one main idea.

You can have several supporting sentences.

But the paragraph should have one clear centre.

Weak:

> Public transport reduces traffic. It is cheaper. It reduces pollution. It creates jobs. Roads are expensive. Governments should help poor people.



Too many directions.

Better:

> Main idea → explanation → development → example → connection to question



This creates controlled progression.


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7. STEP FIVE — PLAN THE CONCLUSION

Your conclusion should be short.

Approximately 25–30 words is enough.

Include:

your overall conclusion

your position, where necessary

a final implication if useful


Do not introduce:

a completely new argument

a new example

a new major point


The conclusion should close the argument, not restart it.

Think:

> What have I demonstrated?



Not:

> “What else can I add?”




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8. QUESTION ANALYSIS EXAMPLE

Consider:

> Some people believe that children should begin learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think it should be introduced at secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.



Before writing, your plan should look something like this:

Topic

Foreign-language education for children.

Question type

Discuss both views + opinion.

View 1

Primary school.

Reason: younger learners may develop pronunciation and communication skills naturally.

View 2

Secondary school.

Reason: older students may have stronger cognitive and academic foundations.

My position

Start early, provided the programme is age-appropriate.

Now the essay has a direction.

You are no longer writing blindly.


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9. DO NOT CONFUSE “MORE WORDS” WITH “MORE DEVELOPMENT”

A common mistake is adding sentences simply to reach 250 words.

For example:

> Public transport is useful. It is important. It is beneficial. It helps society. It is good for cities.



This is repetition, not development.

Instead:

> An efficient public transport network can reduce congestion by moving large numbers of commuters simultaneously. When buses and trains provide reliable alternatives to private cars, fewer vehicles are likely to enter heavily congested areas during peak hours.



The second version develops a clear cause-and-effect relationship.


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10. YOUR WORD COUNT STRATEGY

The official minimum is 250 words. 

A practical target is around:

Introduction: 40–50

Body 1: 80–100

Body 2: 80–100

Conclusion: 25–30

This gives you enough space to develop your argument without deliberately making the essay excessively long.

Remember:

> Quality of development matters more than chasing a high word count.



IELTS states that very long answers can also create problems because they may reduce time for checking and may contain irrelevant material. 


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11. FINAL CHECK — YOUR BAND 9 AUDIT

Before submitting, ask:

TASK RESPONSE

☐ Did I answer exactly what the question asked?

☐ Did I address every part?

☐ Is my position clear?

☐ Did I fully develop my main ideas?

☐ Are my examples relevant?

Band 9 requires the prompt to be addressed and explored in depth, with relevant ideas that are fully extended and supported. 

COHERENCE & COHESION

☐ Is the essay easy to follow?

☐ Does each paragraph have a clear purpose?

☐ Are ideas logically sequenced?

☐ Are my linking devices natural rather than excessive?

☐ Is paragraphing controlled?

LEXICAL RESOURCE

☐ Have I avoided unnecessary repetition?

☐ Are my words precise?

☐ Are my collocations natural?

☐ Have I avoided forced “Band 9 vocabulary”?

GRAMMATICAL RANGE & ACCURACY

☐ Have I used a range of structures?

☐ Are complex sentences controlled?

☐ Have I checked subject–verb agreement?

☐ Have I checked articles and prepositions?

☐ Have I checked punctuation?

The official Band 9 descriptor expects wide-ranging vocabulary and grammatical structures to be used with flexibility, precision and control, with only extremely rare minor errors. 


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12. THE BAND 9 PLANNING FORMULA

Memorise the process, not a memorised essay.

BEFORE WRITING

QUESTION → TYPE → REQUIREMENTS → POSITION → IDEAS

INTRODUCTION

PARAPHRASE → THESIS

BODY 1

POINT → EXPLAIN → EXAMPLE → LINK

BODY 2

POINT → EXPLAIN → EXAMPLE → LINK

CONCLUSION

SUMMARY → POSITION

FINAL CHECK

TASK → COHERENCE → VOCABULARY → GRAMMAR


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THE BIGGEST LESSON OF EPISODE 1

A Band 9 essay is not produced by starting with the first sentence and hoping good English will carry you through.

It is built deliberately.

> Analyse first.

Plan second.

Write third.

Review last.



IELTS Band 9 Task Response specifically rewards a fully developed response, logical organisation, precise vocabulary and strong grammatical control. 

STUDENT OUTCOME

By the end of this episode, you should be able to look at a Task 2 question and know:

What is the topic?
What type of question is it?
What exactly must I answer?
What is my position?
What will Body 1 demonstrate?
What will Body 2 demonstrate?
How will I develop each idea?

> If you know what you want to demonstrate before you start writing, your writing becomes clearer, faster and more controlled.




IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 : How to Describe INCREASES & DECREASES Naturally

IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 : How to Describe INCREASES & DECREASES Naturally The goal is not to memorise 20 synonyms for “increase” a...